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On Publishing: Writing for Work

In the fall of 2009, I started a grand experiment. The English department at my alma mater lost their Tech Writing professor at the last minute, and the chair of the department asked me to step in and teach the class for a semester.

I agreed, and then scrambled to put together a lesson plan that captured the things I remembered from my own Tech Writing course in college, and the things I do in my daily life. In fact, I quickly set aside the first step, and started focusing on the things I wished I’d learned in that college class.

At the time, I kept in touch with friends and family via a little journal on Blogger, and as the semester went on, I posted regular updates about my experiences teaching the class. And I had a surprising number of people respond to those posts saying, “I wish I could sit in on these classes.”

That’s a little baffling. I don’t often talk about my work, because Tech Writing isn’t a terribly exciting profession. It’s an incredibly useful one, but it’s not very interesting.

And then, at the same time, I was heavily aware of the pressure to “build a platform” for my eventual publishing deal. And in the midst of all that, Carlos came to me with the suggestion that I should start a writing advice blog. And thus, in December 2009, Unstressed Syllables was born.

If you’re here, you probably already know most of that story. I mention it now because that combination of factors influenced the initial direction of the site. I was so embroiled in the teaching of Tech Writing that I designed the site around a significant amount of that.

It took me a while to settle into a publishing schedule, but my first regular pattern included one Tech Writing lecture and one Creative Writing lecture every week. That brought in an eclectic mix of audience — some people looking for advice to make their business and web writing less bad, and others looking to make their storytelling better.

And, unexpectedly, my technical audience was larger, more vocal, and more dedicated. That really took me by surprise. That’s how I made friends with Dave Doolin, that’s why I put together my first e-Book, and it’s why I started drumming up interest in the ill-fated month-long e-Book Challenge (which never actually happened).

I spent several of those first months reading a lot about making a successful blog business. And this story is the story of me not doing that. See…last year around this time, I became an entrepreneur for the first time in my life.

When I dreamed up the Consortium, I discovered a business I wanted to launch, one I wanted to run. Up until then I was just going through the motions with my website, but when I discovered the Consortium, I discovered my purpose.

And it wasn’t teaching Tech Writing. It wasn’t setting up paywalls and guest-posting and search-engine optimizing. It was connecting artists and producing quality art. And, to my surprise, it was mostly connecting artists in the real world. Direct human interaction. Baffling.

That’s what I’ve been doing, though. I missed a couple tech writing lectures over the summer, and ran a couple that were thinly-veiled discussions of my business plans, and then around the time I published my first book through Consortium Books, I dropped the tech writing series altogether.

It’s not that it was a waste of time. The technical advice was good business, and when I stopped posting it I lost readership. I lost an audience that would have thrown money at me if I’d put together the Challenge. I lost options.

But along with the options, I lost distractions. I gained focus. I’m astonishingly busy these days — between work and my company and my education and my family and my hobby — but virtually all of those things are pulling me in the same direction. All of them are channeled with precision toward the future I most want to live in.

And that future involves self-publishing. Or, more accurately, indie publishing. Because Consortium Books isn’t just me. Consortium Books is four or five extraordinarily talented people, all throwing in together to make something amazing. And that’s what I want to talk about this week: who we are, and how we get a book made.

Come back on Thursday for the juicy details.

On Self-Publishing: E-Books through Amazon’s Kindle Direct Publishing

I’ve spent a couple weeks now talking about self-publishing. This week I promised to talk about my actual experiences with the process, and so I started that yesterday with a little bit of a grumpy glimpse into CreateSpace’s print-on-demand operation.

I still use CreateSpace, though, and I still recommend it. You should go in with eyes wide open — that’s why I took the time to complain yesterday — but all of their problems are understandable. They’re trying to find profit margins while also opening up the market to writers in a way we’ve never seen before, and at the same time they’re wrestling with all the punishing old physics of real things.

The Problem with Paperbacks

CreateSpace is fun. Print-on-demand publishing can now get you a souvenir copy of your novel that looks like it was printed by a traditional publisher. That’s cool. Your friends and family will order a bunch of copy, and even hand them out.

But when it comes right down to it, we’re not going to make it as self-published writers in the real, physical space. That market still belongs to bookstores and traditional publishers. The thing is…that market is shrinking. It’s failing. Major bookstores have spent the last two decades putting all the indies out of business, and now the major bookstores are starting to shut down.

And at the same time, the market for e-Books is exploding. And that’s where things get interesting.

Kindle Direct Publishing

Kindle Direct Publishing allows you to create an e-Book project, provide a title and an author name, a content file and a cover image (and here it really is just a 600×800 jpeg image), and then name your price. Click “Publish” and your book is for sale on Amazon, right next to Dan Brown’s and Stephenie Meyer’s.

There are several catches in the process. First, you’ve got to have a good book, and you’ve got get it formatted so it will work on the Kindle (or other e-reader). You can usually just upload a Word document, or even a PDF (if you made the PDF right), and when you do, their software will do its best to convert that into the proper digital format.

Anyone who’s spent much time doing automated digital conversions can tell you that’s a tricky process, though. It’s worse, too, if you’re working with MS Word files. If you did anything tricky in your book, chances are good it’s going to look weird on the Kindle. Even if you didn’t, you might have trouble.

That’s where our custom publishing software, BookMaker, really comes in handy. But I’ll talk more about that later. In the meantime, you can do a few things I’ve been recommending for a while, like sticking to standard body and heading styles, and keeping your formatting to a minimum. Put your story in the words, not in the fancy designs on the page, and everyone wins.

Product Pages and Bestseller Lists

Once you have an e-Book, it’s easy enough to share it with the world. As I said, all you’ve got to do is give it a price and a name, and Amazon will give you a product page. If you’ve got a paperback copy of the same book out, you can even contact Amazon and ask them to link the two up (so customers can easily see the other options, and reviews for one version will show up for both). This process can take up to a week to resolve, though, so plan ahead.

Some of the other information you can supply for your product page includes a product description (which is considered just as important as the quality of your cover art for determining success), and up to two “categories” for your project — what you might think of as genres. For Ghost Targets: Expectation, I listed it under “Science Fiction > General” and “Mystery and Crime > Women Sleuths.”

And that’s where some of the magic happens. See, Amazon is in the business of connecting buyers with things they’d like to buy. In essence, the company is as much an advertiser as a retailer, and with a little bit of luck you can get a lot of free advertising out of them.

When it comes to books, Amazon keeps Bestseller Lists. So let’s imagine you’re a big fan of Science Fiction, you’re a Kindle owner, you’re sitting in line at the DMV with another hour’s wait ahead of you, and you’ve just finished the last book in the last series you had planned to read.

The Kindle makes it incredibly simple to pull up the top 100 bestselling Science Fiction titles, and browse until you find one that catches your eye. It provides an overall Top 100, too, but that’s intensely competitive. Once you get down to a narrow subcategory, though — say, for instance,

Books > Mystery & Thrillers > Thrillers > Technothrillers

suddenly it’s not too hard to get noticed. (Gods Tomorrow, which I somehow got to list under five sales categories, has spent a total of twenty days so far on the Technothrillers Top 100.)

The trick  is to get on one of those narrowly-focused lists, get noticed by some new readers (which should get you new sales and move you up higher on other lists), and then eventually move from “Books > Mystery & Thrillers > Thrillers > Technothrillers” to “Books > Mystery & Thrillers > Thrillers” to “Books > Mystery & Thrillers” to “Books.”

And “Books” is a very nice place to be. Once you’ve got a book on that list, you can quit your day job. In the meantime, your job is to write a good story, design a good cover, come up with a good description, and among them find the audience to start your book moving up the lists.

On Self-Publishing: Print-on-Demand with Amazon’s CreateSpace

As promised, I’m going to tell you how we actually go about publishing a book to Amazon. I’ll save some of the “how to” aspect of it for next week, when I discuss Consortium Books processes. First, I want to describe some of my experiences with the distributors.

It might help to briefly explain the roles of the various entities involved. This is the chain of actors needed to produce a book:

  • Content Creator (Aaron Pogue)
  • Publisher (Consortium Books)
  • Distributor (Amazon’s CreateSpace, Amazon’s Kindle Direct Publishing, Lulu, or Barnes & Noble’s PubIt)
  • Retailer (Amazon, Barnes&Noble.com)

Now, there are several actors involved within the “publisher” line (and, I’m sure, within “distributor” and “retailer” as well), and the publisher steps are the ones I’ll be addressing later. The more important thing here is to see the relationships between distributor and retailer — specifically the fact that I’m using Amazon-owned distributors to package books to sell through Amazon as the retailer.

Money Matters

There are financial benefits to doing things that way. I looked into printing paperbacks through Lulu, but after paying their (distributor) cut, and then paying Amazon’s (retailer) cut, I’d’ve had to price the book around $15-$20 just to break even.

But when I go through CreateSpace, they can offer me cheaper rates because they know they’ll be taking cuts out of both sides. That way, I’m able to price my paperback at $9.99 and make the same $2 profit I get off my e-Books at $2.99.

And I probably should have said this up front, because it’s the first question everyone wants to know:

How much does it cost to publish my paperbacks like this?

The answer: nothing.

Or…well, about $5. Something along those lines. You can set up your project for free, but the next-to-last step is to order a proof copy. So you’re paying for that proof (just the cost of materials) and shipping and handling. If you approve the proof, though, the book immediately goes up for sale on Amazon, and CreateSpace makes their money not off an initial investment, but off their cut of each copy that actually gets order.

It’s fantastically easy to do. And then, once a month, CreateSpace sends you a check for all the sales you made last month. Easy as that.

Creative Differences

As always, though, there are…kinks. That always happens with new technology, and it’s always worse when the company you’re working with has a clear advantage over all its competition. CreateSpace has been no exception.

Cover Art

When you set up your project at CreateSpace, you choose your page size, tell them how many pages the book is, and they’ll provide a template file you can use in Photoshop to make the cover image you upload to them. (Think one long jpeg that they’ll wrap all the way around the book, from front to back.)

The tricky part is the margin. See…their process isn’t perfect. They print out a cover, print out the pages, trim them all down to the right side, and glue them all together (and they do that remarkably fast).

It leaves some amount of variance in where exactly the cut falls. Not a lot — small fractions of an inch — but it can be enough to matter in a cover image. So you have to provide an image with enough “extra” to fill up the margins, but that wouldn’t be missed if it got trimmed off. It’s a tricky process.

The trickiest bit is the spine, which is the narrowest block but could end up shifting just as far to left or right (onto the back cover or the front) as the entire margin’s width on the right or left end of the page.

Anyway, when you upload your book to CreateSpace and ask for a proof, they’ll do an internal review first to make sure they don’t spot any obvious errors. (Nice of them, to save you that $5 in shipping and handling on an easy fix.)

The problem is, it takes them 24-48 hours to make that review. And when they reject your cover because “the text on the spine is too large, please leave at least 1/16th of an inch of margin,” well…then you’ve got to make changes in your image and wait another 24-48 hours to hear back from them again before you can order your proof.

With Gods Tomorrow, I went through that loop four times. The first time, I did my math wrong, and didn’t leave 1/16th inch. The second time, I did — exactly, to the pixel — and they said the same thing.

The third time, I trimmed another 4 pixels off on both sides, just to make sure I was within the space they wanted…and still I got exactly the same response. So I gave up on math, selected everything in the spine, made it much smaller, and then sent it off. I finally got approved. Altogether, it added an extra week to my publication time, almost all of it waiting for them to review the changes I’d uploaded.

Title Troubles

I had that same problem with Ghost Targets: Expectation, but after the first rejection I had Amy (my graphic designer) just go ahead and do the hack job. We didn’t have any further issues with it.

We did have trouble with the title, though. The front cover of the book looks like this:

(Click to view it full-size.)

I got a response back from their review saying:

The title for this book was listed as Ghost Targets: Expectation but the cover indicates the title is FROM THE AUTHOR OF GODS TOMORROW  EXPECTATION. Please make sure the title listed in the book information matches with the title appearing on your book’s front cover and interior title page.

Haha! Oops! That was obviously a mistake on the part of their overly-technical review process. So I wrote to customer service to explain the confusion…and waited 24-48 hours to hear back from them. And the response?

The title for this book was listed as Ghost Targets: Expectation but the cover indicates the title is FROM THE AUTHOR OF GODS TOMORROW  EXPECTATION. Please make sure the title listed in the book information matches with the title appearing on your book’s front cover and interior title page.

Not even an explanation. It was word-for-word. Once again, it took me a week of wrangling with them just to get the book approved so they would send me a proof, and in the end they refused to list the book under the title I’d requested. Instead, they called it “Expectation: Ghost Targets” and I’ve been working directly with Amazon Customer Service to try to get the title changed on the sales page.

Making Do

I kind of hate CreateSpace. I really do. But, then, they’re a virtually free service that gives me unbeatable access to the world’s largest market for booksellers. I’m slowly learning the tricks to getting things past their reviewers, and I’m learning to add an extra week into my publication process. It’s a hassle, but it’s hard to argue with the end results.

If you’re interested, I strongly encourage you to try it out. It’s not too hard, it’s not too expensive…all it requires is a book, a cover image, and a little bit of patience. Give it time, and you’ll be amazed at the results.

What I Learned About Writing This Week…from Dean Koontz, Redux

I love my job. Have I mentioned that? Well, let me mention it here and now: I love my job.

I get to write, I get to read what my Writers Tribe writes, and I get to read all sorts of books in all sorts of genres. It’s exactly the job for me, and I couldn’t ask for anything better.

So, with that as my preamble, I’ll share with you a few thoughts on my latest read: Relentless by Dean Koontz.

The Caveat

Relentless is the story of Cullen “Cubby” Greenwich, who has the temerity to write a novel of which the nation’s premier critic does not approve. The result is that the nation’s premier critic goes psycho and starts stalking, terrorizing, and eventually trying to kill Cubby and his family.

At this point, I should mention the caveat that floated through my head the whole time I was reading this novel, that caveat being this: The plot is very similar to that of Kontz’s Mr. Murder (i.e. man and family stalked by relentless sociopath), and it reads very much like his more recent Odd Thomas series (i.e. whimsical, sarcastic, witty, and intelligent).

The similarities to previous works bother me a little bit. But only a little bit — because it’s a great story, the protagonist is a writer (yay!), and the cast of characters is absolutely brilliant. I’m going to try to tell you about them without giving away too much of the story.

The Cast

First, there’s Cubby, whom I would rather call Cullen and whom his mother-in-law would rather call Hildebrand. And there we go with the fun whimsy of it all, that Koontz invented a mother-in-law who wants to call her daughter’s husband Hildebrand. But I digress. Cubby tells his story from first person POV, and every single sentence and phrase resonates with his unique voice.

“I-narrators” are becoming ever more popular, it seems. First person POV gives a story immediacy and, in some cases, helps the reader better connect with the characters. I say “in some cases” because this doesn’t apply to all readers or to all characters. If the writer hasn’t done the job, then the connection isn’t going to happen no matter what.

Koontz does his job. His I-narrator is humorous without being ridiculous, sarcastic without being cynical, and self-deprecating without belittling himself. By the end of the first page, I had a feel for who this person was. Even though I knew there would be more character development as I went along, I also knew I would recognize Cubby’s distinct voice throughout the story — and see it immediately if he spoke out-of-character. (He didn’t.)

I could go on for multiple posts about Cubby and the rest of the cast. But I won’t, dear inklings — no need for worry on your part. ; ) So here’s a brief run-down on some of the others:

Penny (formerly Brunhild) Boom is Cubby’s wife. She’s a writer, too, and it’s fantastic to watch her go momma-bear on the crazed book critic who dares come after her family.

Milo is the genius six-year-old son who’s probably going to save the world someday. In the meantime, he wears T-shirts emblazoned with one word each (such as “persist” or “courage”) and is tinkering with something that just might save his family. (“No games at the table.” “I’m not playing games, Dad.” “What else can you do with a Game Boy?” “Something.”)

Grimbald and Clotilda Boom are Penny’s demolition-expert, survivalist parents who picked their own first names. They are very tall people. I hope they really exist in a valley somewhere in California, because if there’s an apocalypse, I’m going to go live with them.

The babysitter, Vivian Norby, is fierce and fat and pink.

I won’t tell you about Shearman Waxx, the crazed book critic, because he is an enema. I mean, an enigma. Milo looks him up on the Internet, and some online encyclopedia writer either has a vocabulary problem or a wicked sense of humor.

The Conclusion

So. A plot that’s not only been done, it’s been done by this author at least once before. A story tone reminiscent of previous works by the same author. Problem, or not?

For me, my dear readers, it’s most definitely not. Relentless is a rollicking romp of a thriller, and less than halfway through, it mattered to me not one whit that Koontz was using devices I’ve seen him use before. I was having too much fun with this vivid cast of characters to care.

It just goes to show that there is a finite number of possible plots in the world.

But if you plug distinct, colorful, fun characters into it, the possibilities for grabbing your readers’ attention are infinite.

And that’s WILAWriTWe!

On Self Publishing (cont.): Consortium Time

You almost certainly already know this about me, but I’m a captain of industry. I’m a prince of the new media. I’m a president, CEO, and executive director of a small business registered with the State of Oklahoma (national tax exempt status…pending).

I’m talking about the Consortium, a cooperative of artists dedicated to an industrious pursuit of pure craft. They’re also my family, my friends, and my publishing company.

We’ve got about twenty artists currently working as volunteers, spread across four or five disciplines, and at least twenty active projects, ranging from Consortium Books (building an indie book publisher from the ground up), to the software that makes Consortium Books possible (BookMaker), to music albums, videogames, art shows, and a big art contest/fundraiser scheduled for May.

We’re busy people, and it’s almost all collaborative work. So, to try to coordinate us all, we’ve established Consortium Time. Every Monday night, from 6-10 pm, Trish and I open up our house for any Consortium artist to come by and spend a few hours connecting, coordinating, and working.

Every week it’s a thrill to see who shows up, and to participate in (or just eavesdrop on) all the different projects under discussion. Last night that was Sean working on a lot of fixes to Becca’s and Courtney’s websites, and Jessie discussing edits of Courtney’s novels with her, and then (into the wee hours of the morning) me discussing potential rewrites of my fantasy series with Courtney (and filling her in on the whole extended history of my fantasy world).

Today, though, I want to talk about last week. Last Monday, six days after the official street date of Ghost Targets: Expectation. It was also the first time I’ve been late to my own Consortium Time.

That last bit happened because I was at Starbucks meeting with Joshua and a Public Relations expert friend of his who was volunteering some time to help a good cause. Afterward, Joshua came over for his first Consortium Time, and he and I were standing in the kitchen talking about the challenges of serial publication and the relative mythical significance of tights when there came a knock at the door.

That was Ed and Courtney. (Our Vice President has made as much room in her schedule as Trish and I have, making herself a regular fixture our weekly event. I’m quite proud of her for that.)

Ahem! Anyway! Ed and Courtney were there, and as soon as I opened the door Courtney offered me a package — a plain brown box with a big UPS shipping label on the top. It wasn’t a gift, just something that had been left on our front porch that she’d scooped up for me.

I cackled gleefully, ushered everyone into the house, then rushed for a pair of scissors to get the box open. Then I pulled out four proof copies of the paperback of Ghost Targets: Expectation (the first ones I’d seen), and passed them out.

“Skim,” I said. “You can talk later. For now, make yourselves useful.”

And, of course, they did. They oohed and aahed over the lovely glossy cover (and the brilliant artwork — thanks Julie!). They commented on the interior layout. They gave me feedback on the teaser to Ghost Targets: Restraint tucked into the back (and drew my attention to an errant tab space).

And then on page 50, Ed found a paragraph that ended like this:

Meg gave a flourish, and shook her head, still smiling. “I thought
you were some kind of super sleuth, picking that one cabinet–

Just like that. With the closing quote all by itself on the last line.

To my credit, that was the only one in the whole book (he checked). I’d actually checked, I’d specifically looked for that problem when I was doing my paper layout, but (as I mentioned) I ended up doing some major last-minute rewrites, and that little oversight slipped in as the result of one of those changes.

I stared at it. It was wrong. It looked wrong on the page. The errant tab space on the teaser page irritated me, too, but it would take a tech writer or line editor to even spot it. And we didn’t spot anything else (in that quick scan through the book, anyway).

I knew that rejecting the proof would mean an0ther two-week delay on getting the book up for sale — time to correct the document, time to submit the corrected document and get it approved, time to ship the new proofs to us, and then time for the sales page to go live at Amazon after we approved the corrections.

So I talked it over with everyone present, and eventually made the decision myself. I went to the CreateSpace site then and there, and approved it as-is. I’ll fix it for the second printing (which will probably happen in August, coinciding with the release of Ghost Targets: Restraint), but for now, I wanted to have my book available for all my fans.

That’s part of the process. There are always imperfections. There are always little oversights. Just yesterday I spotted and fixed a typo in Gods Tomorrow. It happens.

Your job — whether you’re a writer or a publisher — your job is to get it as right as possible. And the key to that is to understand the processes you’re going to have to interact with, and to streamline your own processes, and get them all lined up nice and neat with each other.

That’s what I’m going to be talking about this week and next: their process, and yours. Come back Thursday, and I’ll tell you all about Amazon’s print-on-demand provider, CreateSpace. (There may be a rant or two. Or three.) Then Friday I’ll tell you about their other provider, Kindle Direct Publishing, and e-Book publication.

On Self-Publishing: The Life-Cycle of Created Content

I’m a week late posting this, and you’ve all got my apologies for that. I ended last week’s conversation on self-publishing with Thursday’s claim that it’s an author’s responsibility today to learn the hard work of publishing.

Here’s the thing: it’s tough work. I’m a week late posting this because I’ve been in a steady, quiet little crash ever since last Tuesday when I published Expectation.  I spent the last six weeks pouring everything I could into the production and distribution process, trying to get everything ready, and in the midst of that I was even doing frantic rewrites (as I’ve mentioned).

And then, last Tuesday, it all ended. I took a deep breath…and crashed. I’ve spent the last week doing very little of anything.

Content Creation

As artists, most of us aren’t really cut out to be publishers. The difference between the two exists (and has existed for a very long time) for a perfectly natural reason. Courtney and Becca will both talk to you about the difference between right-brain thinkers and left-brain thinkers, and most of us do this because we want to indulge in the creative process.

We want to lose ourselves in the unreal, to elevate ourselves above the mundane. That doesn’t have a lot of overlap with cool, practical business sense. We create content because we want to, but then someone starts telling us we need to find an audience. We need to perform audience analysis. We need to write a synopsis (or a query letter, if you’re still chasing legacy publishing), and find a way to tell our story in a different…worse way.

I could say this is the difference between amateur and professional art, but I think that’s being a little too generous. No, this is the difference between art and hobby. If all you want to do is the fun stuff, the self-indulgent self expression, then writing is your hobby. If you want to raise it to an art, then you have an obligation to bring your vision to your audience.

Content Production

I’ve been told a painting isn’t really ready for public display until it’s been framed. There’ve been times in my career when that seemed really weird to me. You can’t paint a frame. A frame is woodworking. It’s a totally different skill. It’s unfair!

But that’s the reality of the situation. The frame (or “framing,” I should say, or maybe “finishing,” because it’s not always a bordering frame we’re talking about here…). Ahem. I lost all my momentum inside those parentheses.

The “finishing” of a painting says a lot to a viewer. It gives a context for the image, provides boundaries and states definitively, “This is it.” That’s a problem we all have to deal with as artists — knowing and accepting when a given work is finished, because we could always do a little something more.

Maybe that’s why art so consistently requires intervention from someone else near the end of the process. We need framers. We need editors. We need publishers and cover designers and marketers — not because we can’t fill those roles, but because bringing someone else in to help “finish it off” gives us a solid endpoint.

Content Packaging

The lovely Kelley, writing at a coffee shopIt does the same thing for readers. I’ve been guessing at it for years, but I can now tell you from experience: readers respond differently to a “finished” book. If you hand someone a printout of your manuscript, they’re going to flip through it thinking, “Hmm. I wonder why he decided to write it that way. I wouldn’t have done that. Maybe this character should do something else instead.”

Hand them the same novel printed and bound, with a lovely glossy cover, and they’ll think, “Wow! Where did he come up with that idea? I never could have made up a world like this. What an imaginative character!”

And creating that reaction in readers is part of the art. It’s not writing — it’s photography and copyediting and cover design and interior design and print selection — but it’s part of the art you’re participating in as a writer.

You can leave that aspect of your art in the hands of a publisher. Maybe that’s your heart’s desire. There are some compelling voices saying it’s a bad idea, though, and even some reasonable voices saying it might not be an option for much longer.

No matter what your end goal is, if you’ve got any interest in your craft, I’d encourage you to dedicate some time to learning its finishing process. You don’t have to become an expert, but at least pay attention. Learn to recognize all the pieces that go into making a finished product, and recognizing good craftsmanship when you see it.

I’ve decided to go ahead and spend a couple more weeks on self- and indie-publishing, sharing some of my experiences with you and giving you and idea where to look. After that (as promised back in January), I’ll turn to creative writing techniques I’ve learned in my Master’s program. This really strikes me as a worthwhile diversion, though.

See you next week!

What I Learned About Writing This Week…from Getting Edited

Ohhhh, my dear inklings. I did a scary, scary thing.

I let go of my baby, my precious, my sweet toddling kiddo. I sent my tender little one out into the world, went back into the comfort of my home, and closed the door. And then, I sat back and waited in agony.

What is this kid-into-the-world metaphor really about?

It’s about how I gave my novel Colors of Deception over to my editor.

Getting Edited — Oh, The Horror!

Aaron and I both talk a lot about beta readers, why they’re important, who makes a great beta reader, and so forth. The plain and simple truth is that no novel is ever going to be very good if the writer is the only one who reads it. We writers just aren’t capable of seeing the flaws in our stories; we need a fresh set of eyes and a more objective brain to read our novels and tell us where we need to fix something.

That’s where the beta readers come in. I don’t know about y’all, but I love my betas. They’re opinionated and delightful. They’re delighted every time I give them something new to read. They praise me, but they keep me honest. It’s been a long time since I’ve feared handing them a story.

But letting an editor read my work? That is a different story.

Beta readers read like readers.

I don’t think editors read that way.

An editor is not a beta reader. An editor is an editor: one whose job it is to make the novel better. An editor helps turn the story into something that non-beta-readers will actually want to read. An editor has the skills and the objectivity to pick the story apart — and then tell you, the writer, how to put it back together again.

Dear inklings, that’s a prospect this writer finds a bit terrifying.

Getting Edited — Oh, The Horror?

But if I want to be published (and oh, yes, you bet yer patootie I want that), my work must face an editor. If I want to be published (and have I mentioned that I do?), I must slice the apron strings to shreds and let an editor spirit my novel away to some dark, scary castle where all sorts of I-don’t-know-what happens.

Fellow writers, this is our reality.

Harsh, ain’t it?

So I did it. I let Jessie take my book away for awhile and do her editing thing. Because we’re using shared Google docs, I could have opened the document at any time to see what editorial marks she was making and what notes she was leaving in the margin of the manuscript.

But I didn’t do that. I was too nervous. I opened the document once, saw a phrase Jessie had highlighted, and clicked the little “X” in the corner before I caught another glimpse. It was just too scary. I imagine this is the way a parent would feel, taking a peek at the rigors of their kiddo’s first day at boot camp.

Then, yesterday morning, Jessie sent me an email. She was finished. In her first paragraph, she praised my story, naming several elements she particularly enjoyed. Next, she delineated some specifics on how I could make the story better. She was clear, objective, and honest. And as I pondered each of her points, I thought to myself:

Hmm. Maybe this isn’t so bad, after all.

Getting Edited — Oh Yeah

When I finished reading Jessie’s email, I was more than ready to delve into the manuscript itself and peruse those editorial marks that had shocked my system once upon a time. And, wonder of wonders, that wasn’t so bad, either!

Jessie highlighted something she recommended striking. I read the sentence over several times and discovered that she was right: The deletion would make that whole paragraph flow better. She noted where I’d misused a slang term. I looked it up on urbandictionary.com and laughed at myself for the glaring error. She noted a place in the story that confused her, and I had to admit that I needed to clarify.

And suddenly, my fingers were just itching for a pen with which to mark up the hard copy lying on my table.

My dearest inklings, I confess to you: Getting edited might be scary — but it’s pretty darn cramazing, too.

I can draw only one conclusion from this. It’s a thing I’ve known for a long time. But knowing something is wholly different from experiencing it. I am seeing how principle functions in reality, and as with so many other things about this adventure we call the Writing Life, it truly is glorious.

Courage is always worth it.

And that’s WILAWriTWe.

On Self-Publishing: Controlling the Medium

On Tuesday, I published the second book in my series. I posted the same little sales blurb in half a dozen different places, but around here I gave a little something extra. I told you about the process of writing the series, and my plans going forward.

That’s not necessarily something I talk about a lot, because I’m always afraid of my own fickle nature. A 25-book series is going to be part of my life for a very long time, and there’s always the chance I’ll get tired of it. There’s always the chance I’ll run out of material, or just start hating my characters. So I hedge my bets, and I say, “long-running series” instead of “25-book series.”

Writing a TV Series as Novels

My job here is to talk about the writing process as it is, though. And this is part of it. I do want to write a 25-book series built strongly on the TV series model, and there’s no way to do that by accident. It has to be planned in excruciating detail, so I’m not using vague phrases like “long-running series” in the privacy of my own head.

I’ll come up with a quirky character on my drive to work. And then I immediately start browsing the spreadsheet in my head, trying to figure out exactly which of the 21 unwritten novels the character would best fit in.

Courtney wants to develop a social media story that develops over the course of a month in the form of blog posts, complete with a fake profile for the character, and probably even profiles for the character’s network of “friends.” Joshua has been talking with me about writing a story that’s not particularly aimed at religious folks, but works as a strong allegory (none too popular with traditional publishers).

I know some students in my program at OU who have put together and are selling a Choose Your Own Adventure e-book. Joe Konrath, famous proponent of digital self-publishing, has released one of those, too. The medium makes that easier than ever (both to write and to read).

Some of the most fun we ever have as writers are in these little “project novels.” It’s critical to have a good story, no matter your gimmick, but sometimes it’s the challenge or just the fun of a gimmick that gives a book the appeal we need to finish it.

The problem is, traditional publishers are conservative. It’s part of their economic model. By and large, traditional publishers want you to send them books that look pretty similar to the books that are selling well right now.

Amateur Publishing

That’s one of the big advantages of self-publishing. If I want to write a 25-book sci-fi series broken up into 5 seasons, I can do that. I don’t have to sell the idea to anybody. If Courtney’s weird story idea becomes a reality, she’ll be able to publish it. She’ll be able to find her own audience. Same for Joshua’s allegory.

Of course, this has always been the case. It’s always been possible to self-publish, but the difference now is that the technology and the media available make it surprisingly easy to match traditional publishers in terms of distribution and professional presentation.

That’s something Joshua and I were discussing last week: packaging and presentation. In the middle of a conversation on the topic, I said:

I think to be a really good writer, you need to be self-published. You need to craft the medium, as well as the message.

Up until now, I’ve been talking about the “get to.” I get to publish my TV series in novel format. Courtney gets to publish her social media story.

But there’s more to it. There’s a “need to.” All these new tools make it possible for you to make your little amateur novel look as good as one produced by Random House, and that’s an unprecedented and overwhelmingly cool opportunity for authors.

It’s also a responsibility. They’ve been telling us for years that it’s our job to build our platforms now. Now I’m ready to take that one step further. It’s our jobs to build our own media.

Come back tomorrow, and I’ll tell you just how Consortium Books goes about doing that.

What I Learned About Writing This Week…from My Writers Tribe

This past Saturday evening, we writers for The Consortium met at an IHOP joint for what we like to call “social writing.” If you haven’t yet investigated what The Consortium is all about, I recommend you go ahead and do that now.

No, really. Go on. I’ll wait.

Excellent. I’m most pleased you’ve satisfied your curiosity about something that’s quite near and dear to this writer’s heart. Now we can proceed.

Without coffee, there is no writing.

Social Writing

When we writers mention “social writing,” what we think we mean is getting together to encourage each other and spend several hours working on our projects in the same location, one which most likely involves food and copious amounts of coffee.

What we actually mean, however, is talking for several hours about writing, philosophy, religion, humor, Consortium business, more philosophy, a smattering of politics, the food orders that didn’t make it to the table, the wait staff, fellow restaurant patrons, favorite beverages, everybody’s kids (or lack thereof), computer programming, fedoras, relationships, non-writing jobs, video games, and TV shows. After we’ve hashed all of that out, then we might discuss the actual craft of writing.

Oh, and then we might write a little. 😉

Tribal Council

This past Saturday, though, reality was more in tune with our ideals than ever before. Sure, we talked the philosophy and the business and the food-stuffs. I think fedoras actually made it into the conversation again, and there was no avoiding the TV-movie-computer palaver.

But then, wonder of wonders, we turned it all upside down and talked the specifics of our writings, and it was fantastic.

Josh used his soon-to-be-completed Weird Western to show us the coolness of Western-horror mashups. Aaron rejoiced in the then-future (now-present!) publication of his second novel, Ghost Targets: Expectation. Thomas delineated his struggle to bring together three plot arcs in his epic fantasy. Jessie shared her excitement in filling in story gaps, as well as her hopes of putting “The End” to her novel’s first draft very soon. I talked about publishing Book 1 of my paranormal trilogy this coming April.

The Writers Tribe hunkered around the fire and told its tales. We Council-ed the way we’ve rarely Council-ed before, can I can an amen? Testify!

One tribe member’s voice brought me up short, though. And that’s the one I really want to tell you about today.

Getting Tapped on the Shoulder

The voice that made me sit back and go “hmmmmm” was JT’s. He has started the first drafts of several novel-worthy stories, but none of them have pulled at him to finish them. As the rest of us discussed our noveling woes, he sat back and listened. In the course of the conversation, we got around to the point of how difficult it is to finish the first draft of anything–

–and how, as several of us put it, the first draft of anything is “crap.”

In one of the (very brief) lulls in the conversation, JT said, “You guys are making me not want to write.”

If you’d been present in that freezing little back room at IHOP, you would’ve seen an entire table of writers start backpedaling like Wile E. Coyote going off a cliff. None of us retracted our statements, but we each assured JT that we’ve all been there, we’ve all faced the blank page and the doubts about what happens next, we’ve all struggled with the quality of our first draft, our first book, etc.

The conversation meandered from there (as it so often does at social writings), and JT ended up telling us an extremely cool story idea he wants to start working on. But his initial lament stuck with me, and it reminded me of a few things I’d forgotten.

Speak Truthfully, But Carry a Feather (No Sticks!)

Writers love other writers. That’s pretty much a given. We’re a patchwork tribe of misfits who don’t always feel at home in other circles. We try to fit in elsewhere, and sometimes it works — but a lot of us end up getting hurt because our ideas and our dreams find a chilly reception…or, worse, indifference.

That’s why we need each other so much. We need to be able to sit down with others of our kind and spin crazy tales — and look across the campfire at a fellow writer and see complete acceptance in that other’s eyes. Without that fellowship, we feel lost and misunderstood and devalued.

Because we need each other so desperately, we also have a great obligation to each other. We have the responsibility of speaking the truth to each other. It is needful that we say, “Yes, all of our first drafts are bad. Yes, all of our first novels are bad.” We have no right to deny reality to a fellow writer.

But our first duty is to encourage each other. That’s why we found our way through the wilderness and to each other in the first place. We need those words of affirmation and those shared glances that say, “Dude, no, I don’t think you’re psycho. I think that kind of stuff, too.”

So, when we’re talking to each other, our top priority must be to praise and to strengthen. The harder realities can come later. First and foremost, we need to hear each other’s gentle reassurances. That’s what fortifies us against others’ criticisms. That’s what forms our circle of safety.

For us writers, that’s what creates home.

And that’s WILAWriTWe.

On Self-Publishing: Ghost Targets

First things first, I need to take care of a little business. You might have already seen this on one of my other sites, but I’ve got three significantly different audiences across all three and,  y’know, I really need to let all of them know.

After all, it’s a good book. You should read it. After you’ve checked out the little advertisement and clicked through to buy your copy, join me below the horizontal rules, and I’ll tell you a little bit about the writing process.


Announcing the Release of Ghost Targets: Expectation by Aaron Pogue

The series continues! Aaron Pogue and Consortium Books are proud to announce the digital release of Ghost Targets: Expectation, the hotly-anticipated sequel to Gods Tomorrow.

Eric Barnes put an end to human aging. Now he’s paying for it with his life.

FBI Special Agent Katie Pratt returns to the Ghost Targets team to find herself and the rest of the team under investigation for corruption by a government agency. Katie’s relationship with Martin Door, one of the creators of the Hathor system and its surveillance of everyone and everything, leaves her especially vulnerable.

The new boss assigns Katie to a case in Boulder, Colorado, to save her from ongoing interrogation, but the case quickly steals the Ghost Targets team’s full attention. A scientist, violently attacked in his own lab, is in a coma.

The victim leads the research for a drug that could end human aging, extending lifespans to thousands of years. The key to the drug is locked in his slumbering brain, but even in this world where every action is recorded in Hathor, the records of the attack on him are gone. Katie must uncover the truth to protect the miracle drug and regain her own reputation.

Katie’s search for answers will force her to scale a mountain of secrets and lies whose summit is the overwhelming power of human expectation.

Available for Kindle, Nook, and all other e-readers at $2.99. (The paperback edition is also now available.)


Man, that’s exciting. You could probably tell from my opening paragraphs, but the sales process really isn’t my thing. I wasn’t born to hawk my wares, digital or otherwise. That said, I was born to write exciting stories.

I’ve told the story behind several of my stories here, including the story about Gods Tomorrow falling fully-formed into my life. I had a couple months at most to dream up an entire novel, and that novel became the birth of my professional career as a writer.

I haven’t told the story about the sequels, though. As you know, I wrote Gods Tomorrow during NaNoWriMo. Thanksgiving always make a big ol’ roadblock right there at the end of November, but this time I was cruising into it. I’d developed this incredible world, I’d finally figured out who my killer was (although my protagonist was still completely in the dark), and I got Trish to agree to drive the long road to Little Rock so I could spend the time scribbling on chapter 13.

I was doing just that, somewhere outside Fort Smith, and all of a sudden I stopped. I picked up my pen and turned to look out the window. And then, for the first time, I really started thinking about the end.

Not the climax. I’d been thinking about the climax ever since chapter 2, and in chapter 13 I was standing on its doorstep, but I hadn’t really thought about what would happen next. Now, I pressed my head back against the seat with my mind racing.

“You know,” I said quietly, “I think this could be a series.”

“Oh yeah?” Trish asked, not really paying attention.

I shook my head. “No, I mean…like, a TV series. Like Law & Order or Bones. The characters I’ve set up, the world…it would be perfect.”

I had some clue how one would go about writing and pitching a TV series, but it involved moving to Los Angeles somewhere early in the process and I wasn’t interested. The more I thought about it, though, the more right that felt. Gods Tomorrow was like the pilot, the special 2-hour miniseries event, and Ghost Targets would be the series that came out of it — Katie Pratt and the Ghost Targets team pursuing the mysteries revealed in Gods Tomorrow but, at the same time, handling regular cases, week-to-week, and in the process bumping up against all manner of crazy and clever criminals.

I couldn’t shake the idea, and within a couple weeks I decided I just had to go ahead and write the series that way. Ghost Targets: Expectation starts a few weeks after the end of Gods Tomorrow and opens with Katie coming back to work and receiving her next case. It’s the first regular “episode” in the long-running series.

And it is long-running series. Before the end of that first December, I had the rough shape of it sketched out: 5 “seasons,” each united by a single overarching themes but featuring 5 “episodes” (the actual novels) that progress the season and series plot, but also individually introduce and resolve their own story plots.

That’s 25 books, and in the two years since I’ve told a few people about my grand plans — and maybe I’ve grinned like a lunatic at their astonished reactions, but I’ve never given up on it. In fact, I’ve been working on the outline, and I’ve got pretty solid plans for all 25 now, and definite plots for at least half of them. As of last November, four of them are now done.

And today, the series becomes a reality. You can pick up Ghost Targets: Expectation at e-retailers everywhere (look at my commercial above for the full list of links). It even features a teaser for episode three, Restraint, which should be available in August.

That’s slow for a TV show, but it’s pretty impressive for a novel series. Come back Thursday and I’ll talk about the process — about how we’re publishing the Ghost Targets books and all the rest. For now, help yourself to a second dose of Katie Pratt.